[Vote] RHH Tourney Round 1- #1 vs. #10?

All participants were seeded (seedings will most likely change due to a couple of later entries)...All verses will not get posted tonight, the rest will probably be posted on tuesday and/or thursday. but i plan to get atleast 3 up tonight..Reminder, the theme for round 1 was "What would you do if you knew you had just 1 more day to live"











Voters- vote for 1 (just post the number of that seed if u want). user vote- 1 point, judge vote- 2 points, whoever has the most points in their battle will advance..good luck to all





o yea, if ur not gonna vote; just click the back button to save yourself the time











[#1]











f*ck, i only got one day left


put my alarm at 7, but damn i overslept


feel a sense of urgency, i run up in the shower


end up taking a duece that last for about an hour


step outside to settle some unfinished business


start punching my neighbor, he like "what the hell is this"


aint nothin to risk so i pop him with the biscuit


imma die tommorrow so i dont feel no sorrow


carpe diem, yo let them throw the book at me


no hope if a nig6a look at me crookedly


i will easily jook you for you jewelry


aint no foolin me, aint no schoolin me


shittin on your front lawn, good googly moogly


put a bullet in any dude with a popped collar


then f*ck they girl, and then not call her


doing stupid sh!t, im going crazy and things


wildin out, makin mad babies and things


tellin ladies things like 'im an arabian prince'


next day i wake up and im still livin


ridin in a cop car on my way to prison


week after that sittin up in court


one trial for the murders, another for the child support











[#10]











24 hours to live with no hope of rejuvination


I’d tell my pops I love him with no hesitation


Relive moments in history like blacks emancipation


Cant believe my lifes been cut short like amputation


No death defying acts can save me from fading


My life’s ending incomplete like a play without narration


So I spend time plotting the presidents assaination


Anihilate my enemies with no discrimination


Causing total devastation robbing banks of their savings


End up half dead ready to meet my salvation


Wonderin’ when I get there whose name I will be praising


spend the last hour on my knees Praying


anticipating heavenly realms till the hour that Im taken

[Vote] RHH Tourney Round 1- #1 vs. #10?
# 10
Reply:hell hnic....did i miss the email or something cause i didn't even know it started!!! dam!!!





edit:


but i vote for 10.......its some good ish...sounds like something i would write...





edit #2: oh yeah, my bad, I forgot i disabled my email cause I had a yahoe stalker......i will get at you..ASAP
Reply:#1 is funny, and 10 is more deep.











10 gets my vote.
Reply:I vote for #10. It just felt like #1 didnt even care. It was like he was joking around with it. This has to be a lopsided vote.





I vote for #10.
Reply:Damn I liked both. I will vote for #1 though because the ending was unexpected.
Reply:#10
Reply:10 no doubt. I read both out loud, and I can't believe how good their lyrics sound.
Reply:10
Reply:#10
Reply:I like the 2nd one, #10, I like the use of the big words lol
Reply:ten.
Reply:#1 was funny, but it didn't really stick to the topic. I thought #10 showed more lyricism and I loved "incomplete like a play without narration". There were some really good similes in that one.





#10 gets my vote.
Reply:one or ten one or ten one or ten





10#
Reply:#10 does it for me... although #1 is good too
Reply:Hmmm, well... They were both ok, I don't think they tackled the topic to the best of their ability. I think they could've done more with it... But, I guess i'm going to go with #10 just because I feel like he ultimately stayed with the whole "One more day to live" thing. #1 mentioned something about ending up in prison and going to court or whatever... But yea.





#10
Reply:#10..the use of the big words makes it sound deep..lol...sound like lupe
Reply:I Liek #1s Flow
Reply:Land slide 10!!!





Loved the rhyme, kept on topic, and had a nice flow.


Well done.








Temari
Reply:#10
Reply:#10
Reply:# 1 because it waz silly
Reply:it looks unanimous
Reply:10 definitely
Reply:Number Two for me as well. I like that amputation line.


Oh yeah #10.
Reply:#10





both were not very good.. the first one used a lot of stuff that really threw off the main focus.. it was a serious topic and all he could talk about was takin dueces everywhere. the second one was a lot deeper, but needed a lot better flow.. they used "like" every few lines. which really threw off reading it..
Reply:for sure #10